The general focus of this workshop is improving writing at the sentence level by noticing, mapping, and imitating authors through the use of grammar.
Workshop content builds capacity in grammar knowledge, models how to teach the content, and makes use of drafting and revision techniques-- i.e., chunking, main idea vs. details, elaboration, removing details -- all at the sentence level. Modules include
1) Sentence Kernels
2) Building Sentences with Detail
3) Explode the Moment
1) Sentence Kernels
2) Building Sentences with Detail
3) Explode the Moment
1) Sentence Kernels -- First, we will answer the question What is a sentence? Then we will examine three kinds clause kernels (sentence patterns), identifying their essential elements. We will use a mapping process and graphic symbols to map model sentences.
2) Sentence Details -- We begin with a sentence kernel (skeleton sentence) and by asking and answering specific questions, add details. The added details grow the length of the sentence by word count, but those details narrow the image for readers. During this process, Zoom-in, sentence elements, word order, and the use of internal sentence punctuation will be discussed.
3) Explode a Moment -- Learn how to think in slow motion to compose a well-crafted sentence that puts your readers in a place, engages one of their senses, and creates a tone through dialogue or thought-shots. Discussion will include kinds of sentences, kinds of clauses, connecting elements, and internal sentence punctuation.